Just Love
If there was ever a man that I love
It would be you, and only you
My whole being, my identity
Longing for you, aching for you, endlessly
Of a million men in the city
I can only see you
Your smile, your bright big black eyes
Shine like burning fire in the night
For more than four years
You lived in my heart
You occupied my soul
I was your shadow that you would never know.
What love is, is just to love
Blindly, unselfishly and no feed back
I love you for all that you worth
Just thought of you was fine enough…
Of all the men that I’ve crossed
You were the one that I dream of
Just loving you was all I need
Just loving you my soul is complete..
~~BC Doan~~
It would be you, and only you
My whole being, my identity
Longing for you, aching for you, endlessly
Of a million men in the city
I can only see you
Your smile, your bright big black eyes
Shine like burning fire in the night
For more than four years
You lived in my heart
You occupied my soul
I was your shadow that you would never know.
What love is, is just to love
Blindly, unselfishly and no feed back
I love you for all that you worth
Just thought of you was fine enough…
Of all the men that I’ve crossed
You were the one that I dream of
Just loving you was all I need
Just loving you my soul is complete..
~~BC Doan~~
Not just your title is in love, you labels spell love, fall in love, feel of love.
ReplyDeleteEnd with love.
So passionately expressed. I could feel the love deep within. Beautiful Icy.
ReplyDeleteYou love from afar. Will he ever know the truth?
ReplyDeleteGreat poetry again here. I could almost feel what you wanted to convey with these words.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem. It was really good. What a great poem about love!
ReplyDeleteYou've given a great description of what love is and should always be. There also seems to be a touch of sadness of the past as well. Maybe it's just my interpretation. I have similar thoughts myself.
ReplyDeleteI have never got bored of nature images in deed :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteLove your photos on this site. Very Beautiful, Well done
ReplyDeleteRainfield,
ReplyDeleteLove is one of those human emotions thingy..Sometimes, life is happy, and sometimes life is sad!
Jo,
Now, you are too kind with words.
Dragonsongbird,
He has chosen not to know...
Pacey,
You has a romantic soul, that's why you can almost feel it!
Cheryl,
Can't wait until you have your own blog! I'll be visiting everyday.
Ratty,
Thank you! Not too many men like to read poem, and you're sensitive in picking up thing that amazes me..
roentarre,
Thanks for stopping by!
Meghann,
Thank you!
Autie E,
Thank you and come back soon!
another very beautiful and lovely poem, Icy. I can always feel the strong emotions in your poem, guess it must be from how you convey your thoughts into words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, very heartfelt expressed for another. I feel this too. Lovely to have found your blog!
ReplyDeletebetchai,
ReplyDeleteI like to express with strong words, and I don't see the need to hold back..
Ana,
Thank you! I'm glad you leave a comment so I can find you..
Beautifully written...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for stopping by :)
Oh what a great poem! I hope I can find a man whom I can share this with.
ReplyDeleteBtw, thanks for the comment on my blog. I would like to invite you again to visit my blog and if you like you can follow me and I will follow you too! Plus, you get a bonus linky love!
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Sister, I love your poem too. I just open my fb and see your message there. I'm sorry. I seldom check at fb, please e-mail me when you've new thing or new article published elsewhere lol...
ReplyDeleteLove you.