Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Hold On



I am trapped in the thoughts of you
Whenever I am alone and very sad
Your eyes shine through my every step
Caressing, and lifting my moods!


We met once, brief time in our past
You rescued my hollow soul
Showing me there are kind humans
And tenderness when they really care!


I am trapped in the memories of you
The way you care, the way you talk
How sweet words do more good than harm
And sustain my being through darkest of time


I am trapped with the thoughts of you
Wherever you are, I am still here waiting
For an angel that gives me warm light
For a man who shows me unselfish love
If I could once more cross your path
I would hold on tightly, never let you go!


~~BC Doan~~

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9 comments:

  1. I love this, like watching a sentimental movie.

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  2. oh, another lovely poem Icy, and your photo, how did you do it it? it is so perfect for the poem, like also trapped waiting.

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  3. I noticed the colors in your header photo are similar to the colors for your poem photo and the effects are lovely. I agree the poem is like watching a sentimental movie as someone commented.

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  4. Lovely words again Icy and love the photo and what you've done with it. BTW, I have an award for you at my other blog.

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  5. Another good poem from you. It brings thoughts to the front of my mind that I can't let go, and brings feelings of past happiness.

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  6. Icy, that is a truly beautiful poem. You have such a way of transforming words into something wonderful. I always enjoy reading your poems. Thank you for sharing.

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  7. Icy, a beautifully expressed poem of waiting, yearning and holding on. It is styled perfectly and displays your heart. I also love the photo.

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  8. Your poem transported me to the one who rescued my hollow soul.

    Thank you.

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  9. Thank you all for your kind comment!

    Erik,

    That's terrific, congratulation, and I'm waiting for my frog prince!

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